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My Seasons,四季英语作文

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【导读】We have four seasons in a year. I can do many interesting things in each season. In spring…本文《My Seasons,四季英语作文》由小学生作文大全整理,仅供参考。

We have four seasons in a year. I can do many interesting things in each season. In spring, the weather is cool and wind, I can fly kites when it’s wind. And I can go hiking with my family when it’s sunny and cool. I like hiking. Summer is hot in the north of China, but it’s not long time. I often go swimming. It can make me healthy and strong. I can also wear my beautiful dresses. Fall is a season with harvest. And I can eat delicious fruits in this season. I can watch the leaves fall. Winter comes, it’s often snowy in winter in my hometown. When it snows, everything is white. We can play with snow and make a snowman, skate and ski. And winter is my favourite season, because of the Spring Festival. I love seasons. I love the nature.

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写法:这篇短文是描述“我的四季”,在写法上,是根据春、夏、秋、冬四季的更替来写的,先讲明每个季节的特征,之后再写在这个季节中的主要活动或比较有代表性的活动。同时讲一些自己的真实感受,最后阐述自己最喜欢的季节。在实际的写作的时候我们还可以先写出自己喜爱的季节及主要的活动内容,之后再去讲其他几个季节,还可以多讲解一下地域的季节特征和大自然中的其他景色,如:秋天的田地里一片金黄,农民在收割等等,这样写出来的四季更贴近实际。

时态:这篇习作讲的是“我的四季”,是比较惯常的一些行为,所以我们最好采用一般现在时和情态动词结合活动的写法。即:在什么季节,天气如何,我们可以做什么。

注意:在写作内容上,不可以像以往的内容那么简单,因为有四个季节,所以要写明季节,季节天气,季节性活动,活动的人,活动的感受等,要求句子顺序要正确,在写作中还要注意关联词的使用,如用了“因为”,就不能用“所以”,二者不可以同时出现。词量要控制在80个词以内。

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